My mother is a Star ✨
The Daughter of No Mother
They say when people die, they become stars!
A girl who believed in it, often tried to find her mother in stars. She often sat on her roof and told her mother about how her day was. She told her how she loved a street dog and how that dog loved her back.
She told her how her teacher applauded her when she spoke in the class. She told her how that she ate an ice and she liked it very much. She told her about the pencil that she lost and she cried for it. She told her about her best friend who is a boy and she likes him. She told her how her father scolded her when she didn’t like the food. She told her how her classmates bullied him and she cried.
She told her how she felt lonely. She told that she misses her very. She told her that she loves to talk with her. She told her that she does not like when it’s cloudy and she cannot see her. She asked for a promised that her mother would always be with her.
Emotionally written but she told her,she told her too many times try to use different sentence structure.
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