One way ticket for Mars.
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Outline
She is from our country , everyone product of her _ she is excited for Mars
Work hard to get that _ her family background is poor _
Everyone happy and emotional.
Finally she going .
story
Exposition
A girl her name is Kavita Sharma she is belong to poor family . Kavita Sharma was an Indian astronaut and engineer, who was the first woman of Indian origin to go to space. She first flew on Space Shuttle Columbia in 1997 as a mission specialist and primary robotic arm operator. Her second flight was on STS-107, the final flight of Space Shuttle Columbia in 2003.
Rising action
She is bright students in during the school and college as well so she got h scholarship from Indian government and join an ISRO and Start working with them.
Climax
And one' day she got a. Opportunities to go Mars and have information for humanity and related to humans life but their are a condition that there is no possibility to return Earth , but she is brave she accepted the offer letter and ready to go Mars in one way
Falling actin
Everyone happy to know that she is going to Mars but her family have no idea it was one way ticket to go Mars , but every one so happy and emotional for Kavita Sharma she is so excited to see and learn new things About Mars
Denouement
She landed on mars mission and successful collecting all information and Luckily she got a chances to back on Earth . now all information provided to ISRO and they are happy and trying to send again in New project...and every Indian proud of her .,,!
It's nice story but you need take care of spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteYou wirte nice but most of spelling are wrong.
ReplyDeleteI am done profreading
DeleteIt is good to see that you have mentioned all the elements in your story, however we can write them in paragraphs. Need to work on spellings.
ReplyDeleteOk ma'am I will correct it after the class. Thanks you ma'am
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